i should be finishing up the rest of the shots this weekend any sugjestions would be great.
Shot 1: Bob is sitting on the couch reading his news paper.
Shot 2: M.J. walks in from the kitchen on her way out.
Shot 2B: continuing walking to the door. (for timing)
Shot 2C: M.J. says good by as she walks out.
Shot 3: Bob resonds to M.J. Leaving by waving but does not look.
Shot 4: door closing behind M.J.
Shot 5: Bob looks up and begins Singing "A Day in the Life".
Shot 6a&b: Bob throws the news paper on the couch and gets up.
Shot 7a-e: Bob does a full spin on his way to grab the lamp.
Shot 8: Bob grabs the lamp.
Shot 9: the cat changes the song. ( cat will be sitting inbetween the speakers)
Shot 10: Bob glars at the cat.
3 comments:
Mike, Good start. You can already start to finalize camera shots/angles at this stage, and I have some suggestions for those. First, you need an establishing shot – or even two – that show both the room and Bob (his face). Shot 2, you might consider the camera trick of changing the focus: you could have a narrow depth of field looking at Bob’s head with the door out of focus over his shoulder; the focus shifts to Bob being out of focus to the door/MJ being IN focus. Shot 2C, maybe a CU of MJ? I like Shot 4 – would love more interesting angles like that. Shot 5 – maybe a worm’s eye view? Shots 6-7 seem bland, maybe mix in some more angles. Shot 10 – maybe an extreme CU of Bob’s eyes?
Nice looking animatics. Looks like you got most of the timing down. I agree with Ezra that you need an establishing shot. Like me, I think that you could also use more varied camera angles and shots. Overall really nice job.
I was thinking maybe ad a little bump mapping to the carpet and give it some more texture later on since this is your anamatic.
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